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It's a beautiful Day by Bienoo It's a beautiful Day by Bienoo
Okay so THIS is exactly the kind of style I have always wanted. ANATOMY. I NEED TO INVOLVE ANATOMY DETAILS.
I really REALLY love how this came out <3

2,5 hours in SAI



EDIT: I don't know how the light spots came there qq I will try to remove them.
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woop first critique c: sorry if it's terrible hahah

So I really love this!! Like actually I'm so jealous of the perf shading and highlights and such. good job!!
One thing that bothers me the most is that left hind leg. The hind legs' bones should be the same length even if they are in different poses; the left hind leg's metatarsals ([link]) is really, really short and impossibly curved. This is because the entire hind leg is positioned to start too far down on the body; the upper part of that hind leg should be hidden from view by the body, making the upper part look less long and giving you more room to work with the metatarsals.
Also, the hind paws are a little strange! Even though they're webbed, they aren't flat pieces of paper. You should still see that they have 3D bones, and that left hind leg's paw is like unnaturally curved xD Think about it; if you're running forward and the camera is to your right, are both of your feet going to be pointing toward the camera and down like that? It's hard to explain, but that foot should be curved the other way and not all of the toes should be visible like that. Same with the front left leg; try making it so that a few digits are blocked by the others.

Finally, the right ear (the one behind the head) seems to be placed the wrong way! I get that it's supposed to be turned like that due to the wind, but that ear is just completely backwards! How would it even connect to the head? xD try making it more pointing downwards instead of straight to the left. that's just nitpicking though, it's already great!

I just love your shading and those highlights! and the pose is just so playful and fun-looking. The expression is so cute too! You just need to work mostly on anatomy like you said but it's so pretty already! great job!

also I have no idea what those things even mean on the right because they're intended for like actual big art and this is just a style practice i guess?? they dont even work idk haha

<3
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Kolala-Bear Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
your art progress and improvement is amazing o__O
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VlSl0N Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
I didn't recognize this to be your art!! Well done!
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nomisaur Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, my dear warstwa.
YOU JUST KILLED ME WITH THIS.
WHY CAN'T I DRAW SO GOOD LIKE YOU DO? ;~;
skdfjsfhsdkfhjdskfh you're so awesome i can't even :iconthefeelsplz:
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AJHHsahdsjhgHGSFJF WARSTWA NO
That's not trUE
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nomisaur Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HFSLDKLSKH YES
It's true, I swear!
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LittyKittyStar Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that's sooo cutee! And for the title here is a apropriated music: [link] (ignore the drawingd, just listen the music)
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MysticalFiregirl Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*DIes becuaes two gowd* :iconcannotevenplz:
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nO LIVE
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MysticalFiregirl Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hMM OKAY
aRGH SONG STUCK IN MY HEAD BUT I DON'T REALLY MIND bUT wHTATEVER
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julian0123 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's an incredible style...
And an awesome picture!
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fledglings Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty shading:)
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ooshii Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
dsfds wow, this looks really great o v o
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alexandergreat20 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
looks very nice
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S3cRt Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Nice
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seth-ravenclaw Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ITS A FISH CAT!!! :iconsquishhugplz:
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:iconbienoo:
Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
IT'S GOING TO EAT U
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seth-ravenclaw Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
let it eat me. ^^
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iCaitlynn Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
LOL I first thought that was =Redrie's work xD
But ahh love this style c: Gjub! ;D
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Isihock Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Love the shading <33 This looks incredible ;o;; I love her little hands asdfg
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sdff thanks ;U;
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Isihock Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
No problem <33
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Samooraii Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow! You should be proud of yourself, It looks lovely!
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why-so-cirrus Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really amazing :D
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:iconbienoo:
Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! <3
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Snowblind-Monubone Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This looks so awesome~ owo
I love your anatomy style, you should draw this more often. <3
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Amber100 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this is your best piece of art until now! I love the pose, the anatomy, the colours, everything!! :3
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thankyou ;A; <33
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Amber100 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem C:
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Paprikato Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Hoe heb je je stijl zo erg veranderd?o-o
welke texture + heb je de schaduwe ingetekent?XD
en hoe groot ware je lijne waarmee je de lineart tekende?
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Um nou ik heb mn oude stijl gewoon laten vallen en er niet meer aan geprobeerd te denken xD.
Ik download al mn textures, maar volgensmij heette hij Marble 2 c:
De schaduw is gedaan met layer options> Shade en dan de opacity van de laag naar 42% en dan gewoon schaduw intekeken xD

De lijnen waren 20 volgensmij, ik druk niet op mn pen en met een grootte van 20 of hoger krijg je een ander effect

^LONG
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Paprikato Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
je lijnen 20? dan zijn ze SUPER DIK XD
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
als je hard drukt/ de pen settings verkeerd hebt staan wel ja xD
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Paprikato Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
lol xD
k, maar heb je niet dat je nog dezelfde dinge doet als je oude stijl?
mij lukt het echt niet om het helemaal te verandere.. O_O
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ik heb wel de neiging om terug te vallen maar ja xD... Ik laat gewoon alles los en ik zie wel. No idea ;;
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Paprikato Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
maar wie zijn je inspiraties daarvoor dan?:D
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=Capukat en =PaijkHuv voor de stijl UuU
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Nougatuu Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
This is just awesome ;A; I want your skills
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Mahsira Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow ,this is really really beautiful ! the fur direction is all right and the detail is also obvious <3
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Lily-Lyn-Rain Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is so cute!!!
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red-sunfox Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww!! This is awesome<3 How did you get it transparent on SAI though??
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Bienoo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
save as .Png and click 320pt. (or something I don't know what it says)
If it doesn't work (If you have a cracked version of SAI) You can save it in .psd and make it transparent with the magic wand tool c:
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red-sunfox Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :la:
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Isihock Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Save it as a PNG :>
if you have nothing in the background layer it's transparent automatically
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red-sunfox Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!! It workes!
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Isihock Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
No problem <3 glad it helped
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PixeledHeartBeatx Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is way to awesome!!! <3
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Tsukihii Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really awesome!!
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Roxalew Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconawwwplz::iconsaysplz: bhjdsbvhjdfbvhjfd SO CUTE <33333 seriously fantastic job on this piece :clap::clap::clap:
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WhosKelly Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is amazing :)What texture did you use? Or is there no texture? xD it's hard to tell on my iPod aha MORE LIKE THIS!
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